I'm planning a Tr!

[tombraidergal]

I'm going to make a flash Tomb Raider and it carries on after tr Underworld, i don't know a name yet but she visits Madagascar, Australian Outback, Morrocco, and many more, the story line is that she has to find an artifact that can make sure if her mother ever comes back from Avalon she won't die, this is because if she comes back to Earth all her years will come back to her, so she will age and die. But Lara has to stop this, but the artifact is split into several peices and Lara has to find them, Winston tells her about this, and she has a new house with better Gymnasium and Swimming pools and other rooms. what do you guys think. it will take me a while maybe a year coz its flash, but i might post it on Youtube, i will do each level a seperate Flash document. Please comment and tell me what you think!

[Veppie]

I'm getting bored with the 'mom' thing. Maybe you can better start something more original...

[ihatemilkduds]

Originally Posted by tombraidergal

the story line is that she has to find an artifact that can make sure if her mother ever comes back from Avalon she won't die, this is because if she comes back to Earth all her years will come back to her, so she will age and die.

Interesting notion. . .but why would Amelia die if she came back? She'd probably only be in her 50's or 60's. At most, 70's if we're going by Lara's original birthdate in '68.

I think you should go for it if it's what you really want to do. Sounds like fun.

[crazyraider-147]

i would love to play it but the seperated peaces came back

[Lara_Super_Fan]

You're wasting your time. Don't bother. The story sounds s**t anyway, not to sound rude or anything.

[Load]

Originally Posted by Lara_Super_Fan

You're wasting your time. Don't bother. The story sounds s**t anyway, not to sound rude or anything.

Wow that actually is pretty rude, even if you werent trying to be anyway.


I say do it if you want, its your choice. (:

[larac_tr]

Originally Posted by Lara_Super_Fan

You're wasting your time. Don't bother. The story sounds s**t anyway, not to sound rude or anything.

wow. that was mean. i think it sounds like a good idea.

[crazyraider-147]

i love any game with lara croft

[TheTimeTravelingVampire]

Cool!!!!

@lsf -

[ahphooey]

Good job Tomb Raider gal! Can't wait to hear how it's going. And for all of you unfortunate enough to read Lara_Super_Fan's post here or anywhere else, they have been reported for abuse to the webmaster by several other users. No one here takes too kindly to the garbage this user is telling people. What do you expect, the user is 15 years old and has no sense of social responsibility that most people over 12 have.

[Adam Segarty]

Originally Posted by Lara_Super_Fan

You're wasting your time. Don't bother. The story sounds s**t anyway, not to sound rude or anything.

What the hells wrong with you? ive just read 2 rude comments from you, why dont you go somewhere else if your gunna be rude, if you dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all.

[ryan2_2cool]

Originally Posted by Lara_Super_Fan

You're wasting your time. Don't bother. The story sounds s**t anyway, not to sound rude or anything.

Wats your problem !! ??

[ihatemilkduds]

We're wasting our time by even responding to that kind of garbage guys. People who preface or end whatever they say with "not to sound rude" or "no offense" are kidding themselves. Their intention is quite clear.

Like I've already said, I think you should go ahead with this idea. It sounds like it'd be fun to do. . .challenging, but fun. I think you should work on adding some kind of twist to the story as well.

Like. . .maybe Lara's mum won't want to come back, hm?

[Atlantis3735]

ihatemilkduds, I like your twist
That is the only thing that is appealing to me in this thread.
But tombraidergal, don't let any thoughtless comments stop you.

[tombraidergal]

thank you guys for sticking up for me, your all so kind, but i'm thinking of changing it to a book instead coz it'd be good that way, it'll still take me a long time, maybe i will do a twist and thanks for your suggestions, i'm thinking of becoming an author and have written loads of short stories but never got them published when i was i child, but now, i could be a really good young author because i'm writing a book, it's called The quests of Avalon, kinda stole the avalon name but ah well. It will have pics in it and i started it in like february time, i have had a break from it for about 2 months but i'm gonna carry on writing it, i wonna be one of the youngest british authors along with other people and if you ever see a book with E.A. Wilder on it be sure to check it out! I will have a go, and some rude people around here, probably Hormones!

[Mr Croft]

I'd prefer a game but it's your choice.
Dont let anyone stop u

[tombraidergal]

I can tell you some other places she goes to, here is the order...

1) Madagascar

2)Australian Outback

3) Morrocco

4) England

5) Red Sea (Israel)

There are a few more but these are mostly the beginning places (maybe levels). Hope you like the sound of them. I have designed the outfits and planned the first 2 places and still planning the 3rd. My drawing isn't that good so the tomb designs (Kinda concept art) might not look very good when i post them here. be sure to keep checking though!

[tombraidergal]

oh yeah, i'll be designing the front cover too! I'll post it here when its done!

[tombraidergal]

Can any of you guys help me think of a name for my tr? All i have got is nothing for the name. please help!

[Arctic]

Originally Posted by tombraidergal

I can tell you some other places she goes to, here is the order...

1) Madagascar

2)Australian Outback

3) Morrocco

4) England

5) Red Sea (Israel)

I like the locations. All new and fresh! Except England, of course, but it's fine with me since it's her home country
The story sounds interesting too. But maybe not too much mother-stuff, it's getting kinda monotonous
But really I like your idea!

And don't even bother listening to Lara_Super_Fan's post. If it's something, you want to do, then do it

Edit: Hmm.. the name. That's a hard one

[lilhanhan]

Originally Posted by tombraidergal

I can tell you some other places she goes to, here is the order...

1) Madagascar

2)Australian Outback

3) Morrocco

4) England

5) Red Sea (Israel)

Make sure it's a nice sunny day in England!
I'm getting a bit bored at the "Oh, England...let's make it rain, because it always rains there" thing!

(You don't need to mind you, it was an excuse to rant about Stereotypical bad weather we always seem to get in videogames and T.V shows! )

Nice idea; sorry I can't think of a name right now, but the more you progress on the story you'll get more ideas for it!

P.S Lara_Super_Fan seems to only post negative and rude comments so don't worry and just ignore them!

[tombraidergal]

Yes, it will be sunny, very sunny, i can't think of an outfit for england though yet, i will design them all now, i'm coming of the laptop so bye and thanks, i will think of a name...

[Kara Croft]

I think its a great idea if you wanna do something, you do it- never mind what others say- I am totally for you making this flash game- I'll play it

[LazyLaj]

For the title, you could name it after the artifact she needs to find, or have the name of the artifact IN the actual title... I

[crazyraider-147]

ill surly play it