Adlib Video Game Intros

[xzx]

Does this sound like a good video game intro?

"what I'm going to state is not to leave this page....

about 30 years ago a demon attacked and nearly fatally wounded me.
I made a deal with that demon to spare my life.
the deal meant the demon could enter and be in my dreams.

everytime I go to sleep, the demon is there, looking for new victims.
the deal for your life/s is that if I cannot save you, you will die.

it's my life's work to fight this demon whenever I am asleep.
I have the power to save you but often I am attacked by the very people.
distracted by them, done evil against and then I am weak and not able.

soon or and not forever can I keep protecting everybody.
I am being sinned against constantly and I barely find refuge."

[The Zoo Boy]

It sounds...interesting, to say the least.

[xzx]

Now it reminds me of 'Nightmare on Elm Street'.

[The Zoo Boy]

Originally Posted by xzx

Now it reminds me of 'Nightmare on Elm Street'.

Hahaha true...Freddy Krueger is awesome lol.

[xzx]

I think a game would be cool if it started how it ends.
Then as you progress, you go backwards to how it begins. LOL!

Also I've never seen an old VW bug, in any good, real game.
Enough with these new beetles and GT's, they suck!

[The Zoo Boy]

Originally Posted by xzx

I think a game would be cool if it started how it ends.
Then as you progress, you go backwards to how it begins. LOL!

Also I've never seen an old VW bug, in any good, real game.
Enough with these new beetles and GT's, they suck!

Memento: The Game.