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Old 05-17-2009, 01:46 PM
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Well, on MSN today i was talking to my FINNISH friend, she is cool and totally awsome, anyway i was talking about some XNALara poses, but then said " i might write another story later" well its later, and im writing enjoy, its about Lara Croft (obviously).


To Be Found, To Be Heard, But To Be Seen, Is The Most Important Thing.

Lara Jumped For Another Greasy Vine and leaped for another, her sword felt heavy on her back, and her pistols were making her legs feel heavy and her sweaty hands made swinging harder,
"Ive been out here for days! how will i get home now?" Her ear-piece had broke as she dropped it from a higer tree, she pulled out her mobile from her back-pack
"Zip? hello? Damn, no signal!" Lara shouted, she jumped onto land and heard a familiar sound, the sea, her yacht must be around here somewhere, as she approached the sea her yacht was in no sight, lara fell to her knees angrily, and frustrated
"Three whole days of looking for it! three whole days without water!" she shouted, but then her phone rang,
"Hello?"
"L--A---Lar--Lar--Lara?"
"Were losing signal!"
"He-He-He--l--P is..." silence, the phone went dead, Help was what? Lara sat up properly and kicked off her heavy boots, took of her bag sword and pistols, and her shorts,
"Its hot out here, where am i?" Lara muttered to herself.

"Lara should be somewhere near here somewhere, just keep flying over, until my PDA rings."

Beep Beep Beep.
Beep Beep Beep.

"Where here, land the plane"

Lara sweated more she had taken her hair out of its tight pony-tail, it was long and thin, unlike when it was tied up. Lara lay down under the hot sun. Then drifted off to sleep.

"Lara should be here somewhere. we were above a beach when my PDA bleeped." the forest was muddy and the weakness of branches falling down onto the group's heads made finding Lara alot harder.
"Have we been walking around in circles?" Eyes darted towards the doppleganger
"NO! I know my way around! im not an idiot!"
"Cool it zip, it was only a question." Then in plain sight was a beach, the doppleganger and zip ran towards it, then they looked left, then right, there she was,
"Shes asleep, shes been out here for days!"
"Days, zip. days without water, check her pulse rate!"
"Nothing. get her some water. FAST!" water went inside laras mouth and her body went warm and her eyes opened, she looked horrified, and looked around insanely,
"Wheres Alister?" lara asked panicking.
"Hes back at the Helicopter, waiting, come on! lets go." lara gathered her things and stood up slowly, then fell back down
"Oh No. i dont think i can walk. bother." Her doppleganger gave all of laras things to Zip and she then carried lara, but she had no idea what or who had been watching them.


Half Way Back to the helicopter lara heard something making the doppleganger gain suspision,
"Lara? are you okay?" Lara was in trance for afew seconds,
"Of Course! i thought -" then zip shot something then her doppleganger turned around looking at blank faces.. of Nagas.

Laras doppleganger had to be careful as she was holding Lara and didnt want to drop her
"Put me down, i can shoot!"
"They CAN Attack you!!" lara pulled out a pistol and began to shoot the Nagas.
"I Havn't seen these since Thailand afew years ago!" Thailand ..
"Wait, Thailand? i saw some in spain too."
"I Saw some when i went on holiday to the carribean last year.."
Lara stared at Zip "you do realise where the carribean is..?"
"No." he replied to lara scornfully. All of the attacking Nagas died and the three made their way to Alister and the helicopter.

Afew hours later they found themselves at the helicopter alister ran over to lara
"you cant walk?" Lara nodded and alister carried her back to the helicopter, as the pilot drove on alister examind lara "did you sleep?"
"yes." he turned pale
"The Nagas must have bit you or something, here," he handed a needle to lara
"put it in your leg, i cant bare to put a needle in you. it will help you to walk."
as she put it in and back out she stood and was able to walk! she hugged alister they all went back home to find that the mannor was in such a mess,
"what were you doing!" lara shouted
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Old 05-17-2009, 02:11 PM
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Interesting, not bad. Hope the continuation is soon...
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It might be soon :P
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