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SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 12:48 AM
Hey guys this is all about a new Batman, I'm working on with Kain998, but this story arc is about a new Night Wing, now guys, tell me what you think:

COVER:
Night Wing: Dark Times


The air was misty, and the streets of Gotham were gloomy, in the early morning. The sun was just peaking up above the clouds, and more and more people started their early festivities and jobs. Oswald Cobblepot’s Night club had just opened, and young couples, and friends gathered into the main entrance way, waiting as a bulking security guard read their names off the list.

At this time, Tim Wayne, the batman, was making his early rounds. He gazed over at the club, awaiting something out of the ordinary to happen. “Oracle pick up,” He said into his ear mic, “Looks like there’s nothing strange going on… we got a problem, a bird problem!” He said as he saw Night Wing walking into the entrance, ignoring the security guard
Night Wing walked in with a smirk on his face, as the party suddenly came to a halt, and the laughter and dancing stopped. Some security guards reached, and held their guns in their holsters.


Night Wing wore the original Night Wing Costume, but in red, with a huge blue bird on his chest. He wore a light blue mask that resembled the old Robin. He smelled tobacco, and wine in the air, as the club was just lighting up, and he gazed upon all the guards around the room.

Night Wing walked across the club, and settled down on a hazel wood chair, and asked for a beer. The Bartender looked at him cautiously, and it took a glare from Night Wing to make him fill a glass.

Penguin sat in a large red cozy chair, surrounded by armed men, and sleazy women. He quickly and subtly waved at his patrons, and they quietly went back to their festivities. He quickly shuffled out of his chair, and walked toward Night Wing; holding is blue umbrella over his shoulder, he skipped delightfully, and waved at all his guests, in which they had surprised looks on their faces.

“Oh well, look who got up?” Night Wing said, resting his arms upon the bar, “The fat psycho bird himself.” He let out a brief chuckle, and took a long swig from his glass.
“What beautiful remarks from a young Super hero lackey! Waugh! Waugh! Waugh!” He laughed, and motioned for his men to as well.

“Hey!” Night Wing said, ignoring his Joke, “I remember the news back when I was a young kid, ya know back in your hey day? When you used to get in fierce battles with other gotham crime-lords, and the big dumb bat.” He stood up slowly, and looked down at him, “But now you seem a little aged. Maybe you’re losing it? I mean with this piece of crap club, I don’t know how you get respect.” He then grabbed his glass off the bar.
“Wha- what makes you think I don’t get my boys to waste you. Right here. Right now?” He asked, and itched his chin, as if he were nervous

“Hm. Go ahead shoot me in here. But you won’t, wow you are losing it. But I know what you will do.” He looked up at the old, dirty ceiling as if he were thinking, “Your gonna have your boys throw me out of this filthy club, and then have me killed, 2 hours later. Am I right?” He now had a serious look on his face, and gripped his bottle tightly.
“That sounds like a marvelous idea! Boys!” Penguin yelled, and his men ran to Night Wing.
One grabbed his shoulder. Night Wing looked around and made a motion of a gun to Penguin, then crashed his bottle over the thug.

He shrugged and said, “Sorry man. Don’t touch me.” He then smirked, and signaled 2 other men to try and take him on.

They both tried to restrain Night Wing, but Night Wing slipped out of their grasps gracefully, and drove his palm right into the rib of one of them. The other, got a punch off right on the top of his head. Night Wing quickly recovered, and grabbed the man’s arm, his hand almost slipping, because of the sleek leather of the jacket. He then turned the man around, and drove his palm into his elbow, almost breaking it in half.

Night Wing wiped off his sleeve, and fixed his shaggy jet black hair. He then walked to Penguin, Penguin quickly pointed his umbrella at Night Wing, but Night Wing grabbed it away quickly, “I’ve seen that trick.” He said, and grabbed Penguin off the ground by his collar. “You really need to be taken care of, old man.”

“B-but the… Batman doesn’t act this… way!” Penguin shouted, shaking, and coughing violently.

Night Wing struggled keeping Penguin in his grasp, but finally got control. “I’m not the Bat. But you shouldn’t worry about that phony; you should worry about the new Night Wing in town. Now… I’m gonna keep you alive just to tell you, that this whole operation will be gone and over in 2 weeks. Now I’d appreciate it if you would tell your friend…” He then threw Penguin over the bar, crashing him into a case of wine, and cut up his purple suit.
Right when security arrived, Night Wing was already gone, leaving them to wonder what just happened.

4 hours later…

Night Wing sat upon a building. Gazing over into the crowded streets, where these people called home. He felt pain in his head, but he didn’t let it get into his mind, pain was just a emotion to him now, there was no room for pain, but business. As he looked down at the streets, he breathed in to the polluted air that these nice people lived in for the past 150 years. All he could do was imagine a better gotham. He looked at the stores and people and saw them smiling and waving to each other, as they piled into bright yellow taxis and fancy old cars. He couldn’t wrap his mind around, how these people could be so cheerful and utterly happy, after gazing upon the polluted, ugly streets. He thought of how these people could feel like this place means so much to them, and why they stayed.
As he continued to think, a strong bellowing voice yelled, “Night Wing!” Night Wing swung himself around, and knelt on the hard ground. He noticed the figure and cowl of Gotham’s oldest hero, in a new edition. The Batman. Night Wing stared into Batman’s hardened eyes, as if he was the root of all evil himself. Batman took a slow step forward and said: “We need to talk.”

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 07:46 AM
Come on guys, no feedback at all?

kain9998
09-05-2009, 08:37 AM
Come on guys, no feedback at all?

Thats how it was for me for a while. :( But eventually people talked. I think I'll move my thread though that way It will be out of the way of people who just want to veiw the game threads.

NoMoarDedCawpz
09-05-2009, 08:39 AM
Not bad. Im not really a big Nightwing fan...i dont know know what it is.

Question: When does this story take place? Is Bruce still alive? How old is the Penguin? And the question on everyones lips...Is Killer Moth in it? :rolleyes:

Great start, fanfics make the world go round.

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 08:40 AM
Thats how it was for me for a while. :( But eventually people talked. I think I'll move my thread though that way It will be out of the way of people who just want to veiw the game threads.

Yeah, be sure to put that this is a continuation to that story.

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 08:41 AM
Not bad. Im not really a big Nightwing fan...i dont know know what it is.

Question: When does this story take place? Is Bruce still alive? How old is the Penguin? And the question on everyones lips...Is Killer Moth in it? :rolleyes:

Great start, fanfics make the world go round.

Heh, thanks for the feedback, all these questions you ask will be answered in chapter 2, and you never know, a surprise guest appearance never harmed anyone, hehe.

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 09:09 AM
hey guys comment on my book and Kain998's in this book comment thread:

http://forums.eidosgames.com/showthread.php?t=95125

So don't comment on this one. heh.

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 03:10 PM
Please guys lol, just a bit of feedback would do wonders to the story.

Gopher_777
09-05-2009, 04:05 PM
PUT KILLER MOTH IN IT!!!!! lol THIS IS MY 500th POST!!!

kain9998
09-05-2009, 04:33 PM
PUT KILLER MOTH IN IT!!!!! lol

Please put this ONLY on the comments page in the link above. Thanks. :D

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 04:33 PM
Its chapter 2 time!....

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 04:34 PM
Night Wing: Dark Times.


Night Wing stood up slowly, and stared Batman down. “What do you want? Here to criticize?” He asked, and grimaced, but then quickly smiled.
“I saw what you did, and you just put a big Bull’s-eye on your head.” Batman said and pointed at him.

“So what do you want me to do, almighty Bat freak?” Night Wing asked, with an annoying tone, “You want me to go low key? This isn’t a 20 years ago, when we could take it to the bad guys quietly, and make as little noise as possible, I think you live in the pass don’t you? It’s all about sending a message.” Night Wing slowly walked toward Batman, smiling like a lunatic.

“Why do you hate me? All I try to do is help you?” Batman said, and glared at him.

“What if- what if I don’t need help, huh? Maybe I’m the only one who can do this gig the right way? You need to watch who you’re talking to. This is my town now. And anyone who gets in my way, In MY town, has got a lot of trouble to sort out.” Night Wing, smirked and let out a light chuckle, “You understand, right...” He leaned in closer, “Tim?”

Batman stepped back, startled and confused. “How do you know… my name?” He asked, as Night Wing started to strut away.

“Hm.” He hummed, with a laugh, “I didn’t.” And jumped off the building, disappearing in a crowded street of people, leaving Tim to think about what he said.
In a not so far away area…..

“Ohhh...holidays. So unique and spectacular.” A voice said, at a very large, leather red table. “They go to parties and shows, to enjoy such festivities of good, and tradition. While the rest of us sit back, and watch them carefully, completely disregarded,” The voice deepened, “And then people like me have to act. Act because these traditions start becoming beliefs, and beliefs lead to wars. I must stop them. So, I will show them that these traditions aren’t so pleasant anymore.” The figure looked at a small calendar and drew a large X on halloween, “Its time for Gotham to see me as the criminal Mastermind that I am, The Calendar Man!”

Night Wing walked through a old, apartment, with a tainted paint-job, and rusted walls. He quietly sneaked into his room, and took off his costume. He wore a Grey dress suit, and brown slacks, and put on a pair of glasses.

The door knocked, and Night Wing tried to ignore it as best he good, but the third knock got him up. He answered it and stood upon a short obese mail man, with a 5’0 clock shadow, high socks, and a cigarette in his mouth. When he spoke, Night Wing had to back up a bit, to avoid the wretched stench of his breath. “I got mail here for an uh, Jacob Todd.” He handed him a package.

“Why thank you my kind sir, thank you for the convenience.” Jacob said with a cheesy smile, and attitude.

“Yeah, yeah whatever kid.” The mail man said, and loudly walked away.
“What do we got here?” Jacob asked himself, plopping onto his bed, and throwing a toy football out of the way.

He opened the case gently, and picked up a shiny gold card. It had the name Dr. Crane on it, a small blue note hung off the bottom corner, it read:
“Meet Me at Arkham Asylum October 31st, this key will open my cell, if you do this, you will save hundreds of lives.”

Jacob grasped it tightly, and thought about it, “Well…” he said, “Looks like I got myself some detective work to do.”

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 04:35 PM
Comments, questions, concerns and ideas..

http://forums.eidosgames.com/showthread.php?t=95125

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 08:53 PM
2 hours.. and no feedback.

Gopher_777
09-05-2009, 09:01 PM
2 hours.. and no feedback.

i give it two thumbs. i like the mailman, AND the suspense-full cliffhanger.

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 09:17 PM
i give it two thumbs. i like the mailman, AND the suspense-full cliffhanger.

Yeah man the mailman is the man!!! (And remember to use the other thread for your comments.)

Gopher_777
09-05-2009, 10:16 PM
Yeah man the mailman is the man!!! (And remember to use the other thread for your comments.)

picky picky :mad:

SolidSnake_123
09-05-2009, 10:21 PM
picky picky :mad:

Lol yeah I am, so please use the posts on the box comments thread...

Arkhammadman
09-05-2009, 11:26 PM
nice story man you have lot of talent

SolidSnake_123
09-06-2009, 09:10 PM
nice story man you have lot of talent

Thanks its very much appreciated.

SolidSnake_123
09-07-2009, 12:03 PM
Chapter 3 is on it's way.... EPIC TIME!

SolidSnake_123
09-07-2009, 01:17 PM
Chapter 3 time.... (Oh and if the remarks from the Mad Hatter confuse you or something, just ask me) and of course comment here....

http://forums.eidosgames.com/showthread.php?t=95125

SolidSnake_123
09-07-2009, 01:20 PM
Night Wing: Dark Times.


Jacob Todd walked through the halls of a familiar high school. The school was huge, and the lockers looked luxurious, and the ground was made of almost brand new grey tile.
The school day was obviously out, as he could hear his own steps, in these hollowed halls. He walked to a small door, with an in depth look at Gotham City in map form on its door. He noticed a woman sitting at a desk just getting ready to leave; she had scarlet red hair, with a nice blue dress, and a name tag – Jessica Grim.
“Could I have a moment with you?” He asked politely, with a yellow envelope, settled into his right hand.

“Sure honey.” She said, in a motherly voice.
“I have a message here for an um… Tim Wayne, could you give this to him in a few days time?” He asked.

“Oh, no problem.” She said, and took the yellow envelope, with a smile on her face.
“And please don’t read it, it has very… em… personal things in their.” He said, but couldn’t help from smiling.

He walked away with an evil grin on his face, and strutted very fast.

A few hours later……

Night Wing patrolled the city. It was the worst time of the day in Gotham. The Night. At this time, men were dealing drugs and committing un-seen crimes. But Night Wing could see. This was Night Wing’s playground now; the night was like his home, if he didn’t see a crime, it wasn’t happening. He had hacked into several police radios and was having feeds from every where from Gotham, and Arkham Island.

Night Wing stood atop a small building and peered down on the empty streets. He tried to listen in as intently as he could, and he thought things were a bit… to quiet. Until he saw a huge flash of light from a building next to him, he quickly turned his head with a bit of a confused look on his face.

He lunged off the building, grabbed onto a window sill, and flipped in gracefully. He then somersaulted, and landed into a small alleyway.

He heard some strange noises from inside a huge red door, rusted and dirty, like it had been used for over 15 years. He began to open the door with extreme silence; his curiosity was now getting to him. He walked into the building to find a huge empty room. With cracked wood floors, and a wall with cheap paint, fading away like the wind. “Why are you in here?” He asked himself, playfully.

He then heard a faint voice behind a small, wall. This wall was surprisingly new. It had a nice painting job, and looked like it was made of cube.

He silently crept to it, and put his ear up to it. “You guys are idiots!” He heard a stern voice say, “The Penguin hired us to do a job and we failed! And now the Night freak is running around town, thinking he’s the Batman or something!” The voice then turned sinister, “So our job is to take this dude down, at all costs!” He yelled, and he heard guns being prepared, and 3 men leaning up against the wall he was up against.

“Thugs these days….” He said, spraying explosive gel he made himself, “They just don’t get it about us Night freaks...”

He then stepped back a few steps, and smiled sadistically. He rubbed the detonator button, and pushed it down. The wall blew, sending 2 men lying on the ground. 5 other men looked at the hole on the wall, with guns ready, but Night Wing was now out of sight. One man, brave enough to walk forward, he shaked and twitched, as his colleagues yelled: “Get over their quick!”

Night Wing suddenly popped out from behind the wall, he chopped the man in the throat, and preceded to uppercut the thug down. The other men opened fire and he flipped out of the way, and grabbed a small pipe, from the wall foundation. He then dived out and threw it, knocking the gun our of one man’s hand, then dived behind a desk, pulling it down, and used it as a shield from the barrage of bullets, he then pushed off a wall, and rocketed into 3 men, dodging the bullets, breaking their legs. He then, flipped the table into the air, hitting another man square in the face. Then he grabbed a pencil from a desk in the middle of the room, and was down to 1 more man, who had no weapons. He walked over to him quickly, and picked him up against a wall.

“Ok, I’m the Night Freak you were talking about!” He yelled in fake rage, “Now, why the hell are you talking about me!?” He screamed.

“No-nothing… we were discussing other things.” The gangster said, nervously.
Night Wing, (Who was beginning to get annoyed) he stabbed the pencil deep into the man’s leg. He screamed in pain and began crying.

“Ok, now answer the damn question!” Night Wing yelled.

“Ok… ok… ok.” The man said, waving his hands, “Penguin’s got a huge plan, he’s… he’s going to be setting up… a huge heist, he said something about Calendar man and him splitting money 50/50.” The man said and stopped shaking, but breathed heavily.

“Thanks for the info pal; it just saved your life.” Night Wing said, and punched him right into the nose, knocking him out.

“Now its time, to take care of a bird problem.” He said, and walked out the door, right before the police pulled up near the entrance.
Somewhere in Gotham…..

“People these days.” Said a short figure, standing against a wall, drinking some tea from fine china, “They never understand what goes on in the world. Life is like a play, there’s always a controlled psycho running the show from the outside, while the actors slave away in daily duties of pleasing people. But sometimes, the actors must stand up and oppose these lunatics.” The figure now started laughing like a maniac, “But now people don’t have the bravery to do these things. Is it psychological? Is it mental illness? No. Its the lack of awareness. So, why does a Raven like a writing desk?” He asked, and began laughing again, “Only the maniac controlling everything would know that! Hahaahahahahahahahahahhaahhah! So twinkle twinkle little bat…” He laughed and stepped out of the shadows, revealing himself: The Mad Hatter!

SolidSnake_123
09-12-2009, 09:06 PM
ISSUE #4 coming up kids....

SolidSnake_123
09-12-2009, 09:08 PM
NightWing: Dark Times.



Penguin sat at a long red velvet table, with pictures and silver plates across it neatly. He stared at each picture intently until turning to one of his personal security guards.
“Why?” He asked simply and threw the picture down, and coughed viciously, “Why did you let a masked freak walk into my club, and embarrass me, throwing me on my ass!?!?!!?” He then stood up, and looked around at the rest of his security. “How-.” He started to say but coughed again, and held his chest for a brief moment, before relieving pressure and grimacing. “You idiots! Now I have to ally myself with a low-life-.” He then looked up with an evil glare.

“You called?” A mysterious voice asked, and waved his hands. “Ha, what’s the problem boss,” The voice suddenly turned into a deep evil hum, “Too much of a low-life, huh?” He then walked to the opposite seat of where Penguin was, and rested his hands upon the table with a grin. “Is the Calendar man just to low-damn class?” He then smiled, and pulled out a small pistol. The men quickly pulled out their weapons and steadied them on him. He pointed a gun at one of Penguin’s goons and pulled the trigger, leaving him dead, sitting against a wall with a bullet hole in his chest.

The men stepped back with surprised looks on their faces, “You didn’t expect that did you, Oswald?” Calendar man asked, and looked into his eyes.
Penguin noticed something. Something in Calendar Man’s eyes. He was no longer a C-lister criminal. He now wanted something. Was it respect? Dignity? Ego? He didn’t know but he was different, and Penguin couldn’t stop himself from admiring his actions. “So what the hell do you have in mind?” Penguin asked, and then coughed and held his throat, twitching.

5 miles away…

“Come on!” Carl the mailman, slammed at the door. “I got a package kid, hurry up!” He yelled, and itched his hairy legs.

Jacob Todd opened the door, and almost fell onto Carl. He wrestled his shaggy hair out of his face, “Thanks, old man.” He said, and slammed the door into his face.

“What the hell is it now?!” He asked himself, and opened a small box with a toy football in it, “Gosh. I gotta stop buying this crap.” He said and tossed the box and football down. He stumbled over to his bed and laid down, with his hands over his face. He suddenly heard a faint beeping coming from his bed. He got up, and tore the covers off his bed. The football he had just thrown down, was now beeping, he quickly picked it up to take a closer look.
“Oh crap!” He yelled, and dropped the football, grabbing his Night Wing costume from his closet, and jumped out of his apartment window.

He landed straight onto his shoulder, sliding on the front lawn of the apartment building. His room exploded instantly after, breaking the windows off and blowing the wall off, as debris fell on top of Jacob.

Carl, who was putting papers into mail boxes, stared at Jacob, with a astonished look on his face., and said: “I’m getting way to old for this.” And walked away quickly.

3 hours later…

NightWing sat on a Wayne-Tech building, resting his fist on his chin. “Who would do this?” He thought to himself, “Who ever did has guts though.” He said with a quick smile.
“Hey!” A familiar voice yelled. NightWing turned around slowly, looking at the Batman, with a off-beat gaze.

He took a deep breath and stood up, “Let me guess, I shouldn’t have done what I did, it was to dangerous… blah, blah, blah, kid.” He yelled, laughing this time.

“No.” Batman said, and held up a newspaper, the title read: “2 thugs killed, 5 injured.”

“Oh goodie, looks like I did a pretty damn good job didn’t I?” NightWing hummed delightfully.

“No, you killed 2 men!” Batman yelled in utter rage, “They didn’t have to die!”

“Uh… I don’t think it was my fault, Bats.” He said, fixing his hair, “I had no idea 2 died, but who cares? They deserved it. You have anything to do with crime in this town… you don’t deserve to be in this town.”

“You’re giving this town a bad name.” Batman said, and walked a few feet away from him.
“Are you sure?” NightWing asked sadistically, “Or am I cleaning it up?” He looked down, and closed his eyes.

He then surprised Batman. He Struck batman across the face, and kneed him in the rib, ferociously. He looked down at Batman and smiled.

“If you can’t get the job done….” He pointed at his chest, “Then I will.” He said, and left Batman on the ground, utterly shocked.

SolidSnake_123
09-21-2009, 07:42 PM
Wooooooooooooo..........

SolidSnake_123
01-21-2010, 09:48 PM
Well, my friends I apologize for the long break. I think its time to begin writing once again. Anyone agree?

DarkKnightReturns
01-22-2010, 09:07 AM
I just read what you have so far, I think it's pretty cool, pretty interesting. My only real complaint is that IMO the chapters are a little bit too short, and unless my memory or reading fails me, you never showed what happened with Scarecrow on Halloween night, unless you're getting there. But yeah, good story so far.

SolidSnake_123
01-22-2010, 03:11 PM
I just read what you have so far, I think it's pretty cool, pretty interesting. My only real complaint is that IMO the chapters are a little bit too short, and unless my memory or reading fails me, you never showed what happened with Scarecrow on Halloween night, unless you're getting there. But yeah, good story so far.

Thanks man.,