following in rio's foot steps

[dago]

here is my book...hope u like it...it was kindly hosted by DKSM...

plz post reviews...chapters 2 + 3 dont work yet...but 2 will soon. 3 will be up by the end of next wknd!

http://dksm.stibs.cc/dago/chp1.html

[Jedilvr]

I think the first two chapters are really good. There are a few spelling and grammer errors, but nothing that stopped me from understanding. Anxiously await Chapter 3.

[dago]

thanks...about the spelling errors, i live in South Africa, we spell several things diffferently....and i'll work on the grammar...thanx for the review...i have already started chapter3...

[Jedilvr]

Will you be posting your up coming chapters her or just at the general OT forum?