Poem for Contracts

[DARKsilence]

I had to write a poem for english class, thought I might as well dedicate it to the new Hitman game coming out.

The Assassin

Few in the world know of his skills

Stalking his prey hiding his kills

Lurking in the shadows just out of sight

Making sure he does not cause a fright

No need to hide don't try to run

For the true assassin does not use a gun

The weapon of choice is always silent

Yet the crime scene must never be violent

Closer and closer the time grows near

But the assassin still has no fear

The target is dead without a scare

Not ever knowing the assassin was there

There is no room for idle fun

One way or another the job gets done.




I used some of the quotes for insperation(sp?) but no worries guys im not selling it :D

[IronChitlin]

thats excellent, i love it, nice work:)

[carmageddonstein]

It's interesting. Good job. Simple, short, zesty. Very utilitarian, though a little unrefined. One thing I was dissappointed with was the feigned rythmic pattern you seemed to accelerate and then didn't.

lol. j/k. Nice work.

[axel]

that's nice,really good job:)


only a few mistakes concerning the rythm:

for

"Stalking his prey hiding his kills"

you should write:

"Stalking his prey,hiding his kills "

same mistake for:

"No need to hide don't try to run "


"No need to hide,don't try to run" sounds better;)

don't forget to add some points after "kills","fright", "gun","violent","fear" and "there" :)

Axel

[Red Manson Black]

BRAVO!

[Assassin880620]

That was brilliant

But don't you think your gona scare the crap out of your teacher?
lol